tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4538744000429800248.post755475694205859771..comments2023-10-30T07:08:09.860-07:00Comments on It's a Mystery: Opening LinesElspeth Futcherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10330102545384369360noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4538744000429800248.post-15418387033740446202020-02-03T07:16:34.458-08:002020-02-03T07:16:34.458-08:00INSTEAD OF GETTING A LOAN,, I GOT SOMETHING NEW
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The perfect first sentence...I love your choices! <br /><br />The perfect first sentence can take me FOREVER (months) and with great struggle...or it comes to me immediately. I love that yours came to you and kept going. What a lovely surprise novel! :)<br /><br />But, hey, I demand a rubber chicken. ;)Lola Sharphttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14394765053485642935noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4538744000429800248.post-376402341802499832012-05-07T16:28:28.604-07:002012-05-07T16:28:28.604-07:00Great first line choices!
And BTW- I love the wor...Great first line choices!<br /><br />And BTW- I love the word gobsmacked. I don't think it's used nearly enough!Stephanie Thorntonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17437077559099315853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4538744000429800248.post-892112576934440572012-05-07T14:04:18.068-07:002012-05-07T14:04:18.068-07:00No rubber chickens?
You disappoint me!No rubber chickens?<br />You disappoint me!Alhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15625543235578144620noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4538744000429800248.post-42032122090489064402012-05-07T11:40:46.728-07:002012-05-07T11:40:46.728-07:00Aren't they? No bets are being taken on whethe...Aren't they? No bets are being taken on whether the sentence survives! But, it's a beginning.Elspeth Futcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10330102545384369360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4538744000429800248.post-20173384739256151242012-05-07T09:53:39.392-07:002012-05-07T09:53:39.392-07:00I usually write my first sentences somewhere after...I usually write my first sentences somewhere after Chapter 3. Congrats on your blitz! Days like that are golden.<br /><br />Terry <br /><a href="http://www.terryodell.com" rel="nofollow">Romance with a Twist--of Mystery</a>Terry Odellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11610682530545306687noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4538744000429800248.post-43297974988774609902012-05-07T09:01:59.459-07:002012-05-07T09:01:59.459-07:00A classic indeed. Will I ever read a book again wh...A classic indeed. Will I ever read a book again where I don't analyze the effectiveness of the first line? I doubt it. Ah well.Elspeth Futcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10330102545384369360noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4538744000429800248.post-23903756461974640082012-05-07T06:34:15.268-07:002012-05-07T06:34:15.268-07:00Elspeth - Oh, I'm so very happy that you'v...Elspeth - Oh, I'm so very happy that you've gotten inspired for a new novel! That is absolutely wonderful! I can't wait to read it. And thanks for sharing those wonderful first lines. You've already mentioned my very favourite - the first line of <i>A Judgement in Stone</i>. But here's another one I love: <i>Last night I dreamt I went to Manderley again.</i>, from Daphne du Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com